Layout Spreads Developments

After finalising my collages i went through and recreated my layouts, i started with what i used for my week 4 critique as it worked well, then had to adjust for the new collages.

I had to move the length and details to the otherwise as i ran out of room with the bigger sided collages.

I wasn't very happy with this, i needed to fix the key as there was too much repetition of elements, for instance the key showed time of day and the information also showed it, this was unnecessary.

The type wasn't too good either it needed detailing.

First thing i did was fix the key, the cars were made bigger for legibility, and i got rid of the style of road it favour for speed limits as this is easily readable.

I then moved the information from the side back to the left and under the title and subheading, i also got rid of unnecessary details, eg time of day and speed limit.


The problem now was were to put the key, i tried a variety of locations.

In the end i settled for next to the details and as wide as the second column i feel this fits quite nicely.